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The old house .




Chapter 1 :

It's been more than 20 years ago we rent house in different s places ; my father was normal worker in government, in my family we are 8 persons in total me my parents and brother and sisters that's why we was forced to live normally by rented place every time but 2 years ago our father entered at home, he was looking very good and so happy and excited - I said father what happen - He replied all of you will not believe The Almighty God gave to us biggest wealth as legacy from the sky but during he talking me my mother and all of us was surprised about his story but my father started to explain by detail and said i already bought house for us and it's our legacy but my mother was watching his face and looks like weird to hear that and suddenly said how your father can buy house even his own pension and withdraw is small and enough for our daily food and rent the place but in the same time my father was persuading about her thinking and said don't worry about that the almighty god already gave to us home we no need to rent again then he said okay lets go now everyone prepare himself lets go to see this new house and everyone can chose his own room but my mom was strange and weird and said how everyone can chose his room then my father said to my mom just come with us and you will see everything so started to move we took the car to that new house but during our way i saw another car was following us inside that car its strange man, he wear dark glasses he was looking at us with hard face from his own behavior and the way he walk i felt like bad feelings and i asked myself what he want from us ? why he is following us with his car and observe our movements carefully .













We arrived at new house my father opened the door we all entered inside and suddenly all of us was shocked to see inside this is true the house looks like little bit old with the smell of product and dust and look like renovated with platter anyway this our new house no one will asking us to pay every month as rent rent-able or anything like that it's our legacy ; we start to walking inside this house the form of this building is 2 floor and the space is so big so now i understand my father when he said everyone can chose his room imagine this house contain 15 rooms so i started to walking with my siblings and everyone said this is my room like joking between us but suddenly i saw the face of my mom like panic and confuse then i asked her Mom what happen ? why you are looking confuse and sad there's any problem ? my mother replied yes my son am not feel comfortable at all about this purchase of this house also because your father said he bought this big house only with 15 thousand dollars then i said mom where the problem ? did you thinking how my father was able to pay this price !!!  my mother answered no... its not about that i know your father he was saving that money for many years i know also his biggest dream is to buy house with that many saved but the things who make panic is the price of this house but see my son this is so big villa its impossible how it can cost only 15 thousand dollars this completely inside and true to believe it at least the price is minimum 400 thousand dollars pr more how it can be so cheap !!! and how the seller can accept to sell his house to your father only with 15 thousand dollars yes the words of my mom is completely true , of course how the biggest are and width can be cheap with this price and the question what's the reason of that ? but i started to make calm my mom and said yeahs maybe because it's old and it's out of public area look we don't have neighbors only around this house empty are so that's why the price is cheap .

In the same time my father and siblings was walking around checking every room and stuffs from the old people before us , my mom started to release her stress and she started to check the kitchen and the water and my siblings started to snapping some pictures of their room and send it to their friends i know they was so happy and excited this is the first time for them to live in their own house after that we finished to check everything and we left the house we came back to the car then my father start to asking our mom so when we can bring our stuffs and start to live there ; my mom replied yes you must call the cleaning service and bring them to clean this house from dust and i want them to take all the old stuffs the father said okay i will call them today and tomorrow we will bring all our stuffs and move to our new house during the way all my siblings started to gave their opinion about this house and look happy and excited during my father driving suddenly i saw something creepy there's a car far away observing us its the same black car i saw before behind our home before and also a same person i directly said to my father please can you stop the car for while then my father said what happen Sam ? 

I said just for 2 minutes my father stopped the car i push the door went outside i went to that mysterious person who was observing us since before i walk directly to that car when i start to be close to him only 2 meters left he suddenly turn on his car and suddenly leave his place and almost hurt me with his car he was worried and furious i heard my mother screaming and siblings because of this action also my father went out and asked me what happen Sam ? are you okay  !! i told them i'm fine my mom said who is that crawly person he almost hit you with his car and then i started to explain all about this mysterious man i said that man since beginning was following us to the new house and when we want to back also i found him again behind our new house i think he was observing us all that time .

My father said are you sure Sam ? i said yes of course my mother also asked do you know him i said no of course but since beginning i saw his car its same number matriculate and all than my father suddenly said its okay just forget about this and lets back to home don't lets that stranger destroy our feeling today so we took the way we changed topic of our discussion but i know behind this car there's creepy secret something not good at all from my own feeling .

On the Monday this is first day in our new house all of us was arranging our boxes put our things and clothes in order and lots of things our mom decided we stayed in the first floor and for the second floor we keep lock so we can use it for commerce and making some money if someone will interest to take it so about the first floor me and my 2 brothers we took room my 3 sisters also they took their own room and my parents chose the biggest room for themselves and we lets the others room as guest room everything was organised we stayed all day managing our rooms and made it in order the night arrive and we was feeling very tired because of the hard work its normal its the first day at our house then everybody went to his room and sleep.

At midnight around 2-am i heard strange voice inside the house its made me woke up suddenly the sound is like something broken mixed with sound of children playing that voices came from the second floor and i feel like the roof of my room will break if its continue like that so noisy , i was thinking maybe my siblings decided to went to that second floor and want to playing for while so i woke up i left my room i went to check my siblings rooms but i saw them all sleeping what the hell is that !!! also i cross the room of my parents but its strange their door is open i saw only my father inside sleeping also but its strange where is my mom ? i went to the guest room and i found my mom sleeping alone there i woke up my mom and asked her why are you sleeping alone here in the living room ? my mom said you know my son i don't like air conditioner so that's why i changed the room then i asked her mom did your heard few minutes before sound like children playing from the second floor ? she said sound like what ? i said like something broken and children playing then my mom said no..... maybe your brothers and sisters are watching TV or using their phone voice , i said no i'am talking about sound coming from the second floor and then my mom said don't worry Sam don't stress to much just come back to sleep in your room i said okay maybe my mom was right and i'am just fascinating and imagining in my mind maybe its not true after that i went to the rest room i'am kind of person who stay much inside because i have trouble peeing normally so its take around 10 minutes until the sickness of my peeing gone and then am sitting waiting i heard someone knocking on the door and voice said quickly go out from rest room then i said maybe is one of my brother who want to take his turn but in this house we have 3 rest room why he can not go to another rest room so i replied wait until i finish when i went out i did not  found anyone i check again all the room of the first floor but all of them sleepy so who is that knocking in the door during i was inside ? so many questions but no answer even the 2 others rest room look like closed and nobody used and there's no trace of somebody entered before so went back to sleep and my eyes started to be closed until i sleep .

In the morning my mom working me up and said this is 8 morning woke up Sam and come take your breakfast with us i woke up i went to join them i saw all my siblings on the table and then i asked my 2 brothers i started to asking there's one of you want to made bad joke last night when i was in the rest room one of you was knocking the door changed his voice and asked me to hurry both of my brothers was shocked and swore they was sleepy and they never went to the rest room so i asked my father i said maybe its you he replied no.... not me we also sleeping me and your mom in our room but during i question my brother my little sister Jenny was scared and tears start to appearing on her eyes i said Jenny what happen to you don't worry maybe it was my imagination don't took it so serious and then my little sister shocked all of us with her revelation ; she said last night our brother Michel came to our room he asked me to go out of the room and he want me to follow him maybe in the living room but i was scared its was too late and he appeared suddenly in front of my bed so i closed my eyes and i covered my face with my blanket and then when i opened my eyes again he is not here anymore he disappeared suddenly all of us was completely chocked and panic in our chair because that Michel she is talking about he is our brother who died 15 years ago and it was very hard for us in that time after we finished our break fast i talked with my mom and said see mom i told there's something strange in this house see what happen to my little sister Jenny she saw her brother last night and she said maybe it him who knocked in the door when i was inside then she said yes Sam i'am worry about my daughter i dont know what happening to her all this is fascination and fancy maybe because of the phone of her older sister my father then said i told to all of you many times to not give to Jenny phone because she always watching horror movie even she has 7 years old but since 2 years ago she love horror story and also movie even its not on her age to watching that but this is the first time happened to her i mean since she started to read and watch horror movie then my mom said to me all of you make this house good because your aunt will come to visit us and will stay two days so tell to all of them to not go outside i said to mom for what we go outside we don't have neighbor here we are far from the city and outside there's nothing interesting so after few hours my aunt came to our house we was separated in two group me my father and brother and the husband of our aunt in the first living room we was talking together and in the second living room there's my mom aunt and my sisters then my sisters went to the kitchen with my aunt and mom for preparing dinner together during my mom cooking and cutting the vegetables we heard my aunt screaming on the storage all of us went there and we found our aunt on the floor completely faint we took her on the hospital during the way her husband asked my mom what happen to her ? my mom said i don't know before she suggest to bring some vegetables from the store and suddenly we heard her screaming .

At hospital we already arrived and we was waiting the doctor until he finished and then the doctor came he started to asking us with simple questions some of his questions like did this aunt got shock like that before ? her husband answered no never its the first time and then doctor finished his last question by who was the last one with her before she faint ? my mom answered me we was together on the kitchen and my sister want to take some vegetables from the storage i was waiting for her than suddenly we heard her screaming coming from that place the doctor said she got shocked on her mind i already prescribed for her some medicine she just need rest until she feel more better then we took our aunt to the car during the way i saw my aunt crying much behind my mom and still looking very confused and sad then she suddenly said where do you take me my mom said we will come back to our house and then my aunt said no no... i don't want sorry my sister i don't want to come back to this house again please after what i saw i don't to come back i want to come to my house then her husband said to my father we are so sorry Mister James better next time we can celebrate your arriving in this new house .

My aunt continue crying and said do you know what i saw on the storage ? .... i know no one will believe me but its true my mom said of course we believe you then my aunt with her tired face hugged my mom and said when i went to storage i was looking first for plate and then i saw women there she was wearing black long dress in that time i can see only her back i was thinking is one of your daughter i approach her and want to ask her about vegetables place she look like was praying when she turned her face i got shock struck and i think i faith because of the creepy moment then on the car my aunt start to crying more hugging so much my mom and said its our mother sister its our mother i saw her on the storage all of us was start to fear so much because we know our grand mother was died 20 twenty years before and my mom also cried because of that revelation which plunged us into a dark fear everyone reminded silent after we drooped our aunt to her house we still feel confuse and fear especially me what the hell is happening to this house first me someone knocking the door during i was in the rest and talking to me -my little sister Jenny saw her brother who died many years before - my aunt who saw her mother in the storage all of that happened in this house is it normal all what happening in this 2 two days only after we got inside this house i'am pretty sure there's something in this house then my mom suddenly talk with my father i told you this house is strange it's look like the seller want to get rid of this house how the price can be so cheap for biggest house like that i told you there's something bad and strange inside , my father said no your sister only hallucinate there's nothing in our house then i cut his words i said sorry father but how about me and how about my little sister Jenny its happened to us also like my aunt said before to my mom you must leave this house just come to my home for while with your family until you find something new but my father refuse he refused all about that and said i will not leave this house there's nothing inside all of started to hallucinate then suddenly my aunt called her and said please my sister come to my home but mom feel confuse because my father don't want after we discussed much he said okay Sam take the key and go with your mom and your siblings to your aunt me i will not come i will come back to my home there's nothing there like they said its only hallucinations during i take them my mom told please take care of your father and don't let's him alone just drop us and come back to him you need to stay with him if something happen during i driving the car i remember there's old guy, he is great Imam very religious man maybe he can help all i know he is always in mosque praying all the time maybe if i contact him he can help and force my father to leave that house immediately .

Tomorrow morning i went to that place and i asked our Imam and he accepted to answer me he told me where is your house Sam ? i said in the street 85 Area , he said are you living with your family in that house ?  yes of course since three 3 days he replied this house my son was haunted many years ago and nobody want to live there why you father accepted to buy that house i replied maybe he don't know he didn't have any information's about that and because of the good offer he took it then The Imam said okay take me now to this house and i will explain your father very well .

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1 Response to "The old house ."

  1. Amazing begining the story is very creepy sam what that house contain inside i will not sleep if i comtinue to think about it 😨😴😴👌👍✌

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